When writing this proposal I steered away from using you. Also, I used first-person pronouns only in the beginning to state why I chose this topic. I started later than I wanted. I wished I would have had more time to write and revise. Working two jobs that start after 3 is hard while going to school, so I had to write at night around midnight. I only changed my topic once because I am interested in wine. I developed my thesis by knowing that I wanted to talk about the health benefits of wine. The biggest challenge was getting research that seemed authentic. Sometimes research isn’t authentic from the author. It wasn’t as easy as I thought because I was planning on writing the paper earlier, so time management was a problem for me. I had to break it up and take breaks because at the end I was a little stressed out. I find that it is easier to break it up in little pieces because I think about it and I get better ideas. I plan on project two to get a kick start on it.